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Badger

BadgerSpike and Dawn crouched awkwardly under the console of the first unlocked vehicle they'd found, freezing as their pursuers passed the car.

"What did you think you were doing?" Spike whispered as he finished hotwiring the ignition and started the engine.

"Did you see the big guy go down when I hit him?" Dawn glanced out the rear window; the demons had heard the engine start and were heading back towards them.

Spike slammed the car in gear. "Gerlop demons have glass jaws, but travel in large packs. What have you learned from this?"

"Don't heckle Gerlop demons?"

"Good girl."

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wordoftheday100challenge: heckle
open_on_sundaychallenge #115: numbers

Comments

edenfalling
6th Jun, 2005 13:38 (UTC)
I love the slightly skewed viewpoint they both display in their "lessons." No worries about any moral issues, just watching your back. And Spike hotwiring cars is always a good thing. :-)

Dawn glanced out the rear window, the demons had heard the engine start and were heading back towards them. That's a run-on. Change the comma to a semi-colon.
redwolf
6th Jun, 2005 22:23 (UTC)
I'm not a fan of political correctness, it tends to overlook human behaviour and it's just dull.

Got the fix. Many thanks.