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BadgerSpike and Dawn crouched awkwardly under the console of the first unlocked vehicle they'd found, freezing as their pursuers passed the car.

"What did you think you were doing?" Spike whispered as he finished hotwiring the ignition and started the engine.

"Did you see the big guy go down when I hit him?" Dawn glanced out the rear window; the demons had heard the engine start and were heading back towards them.

Spike slammed the car in gear. "Gerlop demons have glass jaws, but travel in large packs. What have you learned from this?"

"Don't heckle Gerlop demons?"

"Good girl."

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wordoftheday100challenge: heckle
open_on_sundaychallenge #115: numbers

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velvetandlace
6th Jun, 2005 07:30 (UTC)
Aw, this was really nice. Cute :)
redwolf
6th Jun, 2005 09:15 (UTC)
Thanks. I could see the situation as a learning experience.
chessie_reeves
6th Jun, 2005 08:15 (UTC)
*laughs* The way Dawn swivels from jubilant to chastized is funny. Great job with the word.
redwolf
6th Jun, 2005 09:16 (UTC)
It's funny where some words take you.
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redwolf
6th Jun, 2005 22:22 (UTC)
Thanks!
edenfalling
6th Jun, 2005 13:38 (UTC)
I love the slightly skewed viewpoint they both display in their "lessons." No worries about any moral issues, just watching your back. And Spike hotwiring cars is always a good thing. :-)

Dawn glanced out the rear window, the demons had heard the engine start and were heading back towards them. That's a run-on. Change the comma to a semi-colon.
redwolf
6th Jun, 2005 22:23 (UTC)
I'm not a fan of political correctness, it tends to overlook human behaviour and it's just dull.

Got the fix. Many thanks.
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redwolf
6th Jun, 2005 22:24 (UTC)
Thanks!
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redwolf
6th Jun, 2005 22:25 (UTC)
Thank you!
virtualpersonal
7th Jun, 2005 06:57 (UTC)
Don't heckle Gerlp demons... LOL, very nice.
redwolf
7th Jun, 2005 08:36 (UTC)
It's one of those learning on the job kind of things.
myfeetshowit
6th Jul, 2005 00:40 (UTC)
I hope Dawn does have an extended lifespan due to being the key. She will need it to learn all these lessons. Personally I think she likes the instructor :D
redwolf
6th Jul, 2005 00:48 (UTC)
Certainly makes a change from the usual life lessons. And always nice to have a sympathetic (and hot) instructor.
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