There was a succinct, yet informative description of the hunt and following fight. The characterisations of the demon were also good.
The additional notations, some of which proved to be previously unknown, would be an asset. It was the side-notes that were disturbing. Andrew wasn't sure he wanted to know how they'd discovered the demon's penchant for origami. Some things he didn't need to know.
open_on_sunday — challenge #250: revelation/reveal
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